This blog represents the collective scholarly efforts of the students and instructor of CAS 100A: Effective Speech (a.k.a. public speaking) at Penn State University in the Summer of 2011.
Friday, July 1, 2011
A Very Good Speech
Delivery is Key
When I think of public speaking, I immediately remember the speech the valedictorian of my high school gave at graduation. The speech itself was alright, but certainly not award winning. She did a great job putting it together, but fell short when it came to presenting. Some people think that content is the most important part of a speech, but really, delivery is what will make or break it. You could write the best speech in the world, but if you don’t deliver it properly, your audience will not get the message or feeling that you’re trying to provoke. When it came time for the valedictorian to give her speech, I was expecting to feel some sort of emotion. But as she spoke, I quickly lost interest because she spoke in almost complete monotone. Because of her poor delivery, I don’t think people got as much out of her speech as they should have. And it’s a shame because she had so many wonderful things to say. Public speaking is like any other performance and you must embrace your speech and practice it over and over in order to get it right. Delivering a speech with the right enthusiasm really makes it come alive. While the words don’t change, it’s amazing how different of a reaction you can get from your audience simply by the way you deliver your speech. I wish the valedictorian took this more into consideration so that her audience could have enjoyed and appreciated her speech more.
A Great Speech
One defining day of my last year in high school, was the day before Easter break, where the entire school gathered in our chapel and remembered those we lost in the past year. It was extremely upsetting to say the least. Toward the end, one of the teachers in my school took to the podium, he was the oldest, wisest, and jolliest teacher in the entire school, so the somber look on his face was unfamiliar to us all. He continued to talk about life, chances, and dreams you can’t let slip away. In one long pause, and final deep breath, he dropped the bomb on us that he had cancer. His tone was sincere, and his voice as sure as anything. He said he would be okay, but he wanted to address us and speak openly, honestly and publicly about what would be in-store for him in the coming weeks.
He spoke with such confidence, in a setting completely appropriate to what he wanted to convey. He was able to match the emotion already found in the room and almost turn it around into a life lesson. If I had to classify it, rather than it being a sad moment, he twisted it into a motivational speech, a moment to learn from and grow. It was a defining moment in his life, where his knack for public speaking transformed the audience from upset, into a group driven to get the very most out of life. The way the room felt after it all was said and done, was that of understanding compiled with many different emotions. The audience, my peers, reached a new understanding with my teacher, the speaker. Public speaking is not effective unless a connection between the audience and speaker is made. In this moment, the connection was very clear and blatant, which played into this speech becoming something that no one will ever forget.
Thursday, June 30, 2011
Bullhorn Speech - George W. Bush
In his presidential address, President George W. Bush demonstrates what effective speaking is because of his delivery, content, and vision. Not only was this speech given to the Ground Zero team, but also it directly addressed to all of America. After 9/11, the country was caught with its guard down, so its appropriate to be comforted by the rhetoric of the president. It was indicative that the whole country stands together as one, and the entire United States of America hurt as one.
As the speaker, President Bush, said, “I can hear you! The rest of the world hears you! And the people who knocked these buildings down will hear us soon!” These lines are an example of delivery because it is evident of the persuasion that the president has on his country. The content of his speech shows that together we are resilient, and we will not let other foreign countries infiltrate our homeland. His visions for his speech is indicative when the whole audience chants for the U.S.A. showing that we all believe in what the president is directing to us as a country.
The Hangover "Wolf Pack" Speech
Making A Connection
public speaking at its worst
\falls to public speaking and what one of the worst case scenarios can be. At the graduation ceremony, this girl Amber was the valedictorian and had to make a speech. As she slowly walked up to the podium, she looked out into the crowd, sucked in some air, and dived right in. She started off strong; looked into the crowd, kept focused and had a strong, clear voice. She talked about "moving on" and "growing up" and "that we are onto the next chapter in our lives". However, as she continued on her voice started to shake and she ended up starting at the ceiling. She started to pause and put gaps in between her words, which made her speech hard to follow and understand. All of a sudden her eyes rolled to the back of her head and she passed out on stage, in front of everyone. This example of public speaking shows the nervousness that all people go through when going to make a speech and what can happen when you aren't a strong speaker. Sure, maybe passing out is a bit extreme, but Amber's quirks before, such as looking up to the ceiling and slurring her speech, is what a huge amount of people go through. All that you can do is practice, practice, practice, and hopefully you'll become the talented, inspirational speaker you were meant to be.
The Art of Passion
Brad Paisley's speech is far from what I envision as a well prepared and delivered speech, yet it had an impact on me. Isn't that what a speech is supposed to do anyway- evoke a feeling within people and fulfill a purpose? He demonstrated his appreciation for receiving the award and did so in an admirable, even noteworthy, manner. His speech was effective, and I believed every word. Though this is not a model of the type of speeches we will be giving in CAS1oo, it perfectly shows how passion can make an otherwise mediocre speech incredible.
In the video I attatched, the speech is only from 1:37-5:23.
Public Speaking-Our Town
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XnPx22NLWe4&feature=related
Example of Good Public Speaking
The Best Speaker I've Seen (so far)
Wednesday, June 29, 2011
The Last Lecture Speech
When I hear the phrase "public speaking", I immediately envision Randy Pausch's 'Last Lecture' speech. Hopefully, someday my public speaking ability will reach the level of Pausch's; whether you're already familiar with this lecture or you're watching it for the first time, it's evident that Pausch succeeded in conducting an excellent speech. Pausch discusses a concern, that I'd imagine lies within everyone at some point in their lives; how can an individual succeed in achieving their childhood dream? Pausch reveals early on how he lives to achieve his dreams, and surprises everyone with the revelation that he's also dying with pancreatic cancer. Overall, the topic of the 'Last Lecture' relates to a broad audience, but Pausch's down-to-earth and comedic tone helps to really entrap viewers attention within his words and make the speech so successful. It should also be noted that Pausch practices comfortable eye contact with the audience, and hides any nervous mannerisms that may be haunting him.
I enjoy listening to the 'Last Lecture' because it is so inspirational, and has been one of the only speeches that has ever actually affected my personal thoughts to a vast extent. As most people do, I often stress myself out over small and insignificant daily events, which in turn causes me to fill my schedule with unnecessary busy work, and to lose track of my own personal goals. I find that after watching the 'Last Lecture' I seem to review my current situation, and to eliminate a large portion of that burdening stress. Randy Pausch uses himself as an example of how to live and dream, despite the fact that he's living with a huge stress factor; if he can be so relaxed and insightful, knowing that he will die shortly, shouldn't I be more grateful and less stressed out about the situation that I'm living in? Pausch's speech was able to affect me as an individual, and the success of almost every speech can be measured by it's ability to affect individuals' pathos.